The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The given line graph information about monthly temperatures from January to December, bhai table charge Chhod total Ahmedabad London New York and Sydney.

According to line graph, almost similar temperature of Sydney from January to March which is 25 celsius temperature. It slightly dropping in the month of March to July ( 25 Celsius and reached 15 celsius temperature), after that Sydney temperature is so increases and touch the same place in the last month. Further, 5 celsius temperature started in the initial month then it continuously increased and covered 30 celsius temperature of New York in july. Whereas there is no fall down from July to December, but London kawarada 10 Celsius temperature in January month then it increased same way but in the pral New York temperature crossed London temperature but after July London temperature drop and read 10 celsius temperature in December.

According to the table, London news 1180 annual hours of sunshine, why the highest animal hours of New York compared to London. In Sydney 2473 hours of sunshine over the years.

Overall, the highest temperature of Sydney in initial month and last month while, Dera list of favourite temperature in London and New York.
The maximum annual hours of sunshine in New York and Sydney.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ey temperature is so increases and touch the same place in the last month. Furthe...
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...ure started in the initial month then it continuously increased and covered 30 c...
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...al month then it continuously increased and covered 30 celsius temperature of Ne...
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...December, but London kawarada 10 Celsius temperature in January month then it in...
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...lsius temperature in January month then it increased same way but in the pral Ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7067810711 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478468899522 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0264366491 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.777777778 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1374431867 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769073523394 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214707773169 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938461377756 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151163865742 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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