The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities

Essay topics:

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The given graph and table illustrates monthly temperatures in year and how many hours the sun rises in year in three different cities of the world. It can be seen from the graph that Sydney is colder in summer months than rest of the year, while it is completely different in London and New York.
The hottest months of Sydney are winter months, the temperature is around 25 degrees. End of the march it begins cooling until June, then temperature continue to heat up again. London and New York’s temperature more likely in months. The weather in this two cities during winter months is around 5 and 15 degrees. But New York’s summer much hotter than London. The hot weather peaks in July at that time temperatures in London and New York are between 22 and 30. As the table shows the sunshine hours are the highest in New York, 2535 hours in a year. The Sydney’s sunshine hours a little less than New York. London’s sunshine hours is 1180 in a year.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56069364162 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37164749024 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549132947977 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8928793809 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7272727273 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26591903444 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115571547185 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100629231318 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232333179883 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372702652886 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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