The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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times new Roman"; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Overall, London and New York’s monthly temperatures show a similar change, which is precisely opposite to Sydney’s trend, with New York witnessing the highest temperature in July. At the same time, New York and Sydney’s total hours of sunshine in a year are nearly the same and get almost two times more than London’s.
times new Roman"; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">In detail, New York is the coldest city that hit a trough of approximately 5, followed by nearly 9 in London. These two places experienced a significant growth to 30 and 24 in July, respectively. The figure for Sydney’s average temperature between January and July saw opposite changes, declining considerably to nearly 16. However, after that, all the three nations reverse their trends and finally reach the same temperatures in January.
times new Roman"; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Turning to the table, New York reaches a peak of 2535 hours, which is slightly higher than Sydney (2473 hours). On the other hand, the sunshine duration in London obtains the least number of hours annually at 1180 hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 965.302439024 188% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 7.07421875 4.92477711251 144% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.28152591504 2.65546596893 199% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5234375 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 283.868780488 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.45097560976 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.068738985 43.030603864 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.1 112.824112599 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809187087589 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048219338144 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425570250466 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061071445815 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439152524107 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 13.2329268293 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 12.26 61.2550243902 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 10.3012195122 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 24.02 11.4140731707 210% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 23.0 11.4329268293 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 11.0658536585 226% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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