The stipulated line chart illustrates the average monthly heat in three major cities during an year. The mentioned parameters are London, New York and Sydney.
It is clear from the data that, London and New York has the same pattern through out the year. While New York has the hottest summer and coldest winter as compared to other counter parts. Both cities temperature at peak during the month of July, which is 23 and 29 respectively.In contrast, at the same time Sydney's temperature is at it's low level of 15. New York and London experience below deck temperature toward the end and beginning of the year, where thermal riding hit as low as 5 and 9. Whereas Sydney's temperature at that time hit it's highest figure of 25.
In terms of hours of sunshine, New York and Sydney is experiencing almost the same average although former's figure (2,535) is little bit higher than latter (2,473). London is getting laest amount of sunshine hours are lower than half of other two cities, which is 1,180.
In conclusion, the cities of New York and London is showing almost same climate condition despite some small fluctuations. whereas, Sydney's temperature readings are just opposite of what other two are experiencing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nthly heat in three major cities during an year. The mentioned parameters are Lond...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ondon and New York has the same pattern through out the year. While New York has the hottes...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...s compared to other counter parts. Both cities temperature at peak during the month of...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...f July, which is 23 and 29 respectively.In contrast, at the same time Sydneys temp...
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Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e thermal riding hit as low as 5 and 9. Whereas Sydneys temperature at that time hit it...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...verage although formers figure 2,535 is little bit higher than latter 2,473. London is get...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...dition despite some small fluctuations. whereas, Sydneys temperature readings are just ...
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Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...dition despite some small fluctuations. whereas, Sydneys temperature readings are just ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91747572816 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59098275366 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1363324604 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0909090909 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189262348468 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687822862923 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666901232407 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120172545282 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545613772944 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.