The stipulated chart illustrates how cement and concrete are produced through the various stages. Cement production involves a total of four stages, while concrete production consist of three stages.
In a cement production process, first the the raw materials, lime stone and clay are crushed using a crusher to make a powder form. Then it is mixed in to a mixer, after that it goes to a rotating heater and heated using fire. After the heating process it is then transferred to grinder for further grinding to make smaller tiny particles of cement. During the final stage, the end product is packed for further manufacturing.
The concrete production process involves comparatively simple steps as compared to its formal. The raw materials like cement, water, sand and gravel are mixed in a certain proportions. To make an ideal concrete mix, 15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel or small stones are mixed in a large concrete mixer for some time. The end product will be used for construction purposes.
In conclusion, both cement and concrete making process involves some steps. But the concrete making process can be done without the use of much equipments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... In a cement production process, first the the raw materials, lime stone and clay are ...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... In a cement production process, first the the raw materials, lime stone and clay are ...
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Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... process can be done without the use of much equipments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0351758794 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67517035927 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56783919598 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.411671452 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394171306383 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147350118025 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617816175983 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241943417213 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444298219273 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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