The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph illustrates, the comparison of visitors on two main music web such as music choice and pop parade over a 15 days period.
Overall, the wast majority of people visited the site was pop parade, though there are numerous fluctuation can be seen in the figure.
On the first day 150000 people visited on pop parade web whereas, in music choice account for 40,000. After three days the number of visitors in pop parade was declined sharply to just over 60,000 on fifth day. After that there were a slight increase on visitors which reach the least number over the given period with approximately 30,000 visitors in day seven. As is observed, small oscillation over next two days then the customers reach on relatively top level on previous days such as above 140000 in eleventh day. Even then, the number of web searcher's climb up on the last day with over 160,000 after falling to 80,000 on just two days before.
On the other hand, the account of visitors on music choice,began with 40,000 people. After two days they reach on 60,000 just fall on 20,000 on next day just like the second day. There were a moderate fluctuation on following days until eleventh day. Moreover, there were a dramatic increase on visitors the coming days which is similar to the pop web starting data with 150,000 people. After three days the account dipped into below 80000 on the last days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ine graph illustrates, the comparison of visitors on two main music web such as m...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'web' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'webs'.
Suggestion: webs
...mparison of visitors on two main music web such as music choice and pop parade ove...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , began
... the account of visitors on music choice,began with 40,000 people. After two days they...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... web starting data with 150,000 people. After three days the account dipped into belo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, then, whereas, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72839506173 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28158035166 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493827160494 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.932272446 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107207944156 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527634888805 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042654493018 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837040804879 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355590236784 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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