THE GRAPH BELOW THE CONTRIBUTION OF THREE SECTORS - AGRICULTURE, MANUFACTURING, AND BUSINESSES AND FINANCIAL SERVICES - TO THE UK ECONOMY IN THE TWENTIETH CENTURY.
The bar chart illustrates data about the amount of impact of various factors to the economic United Kingdom from 1900 to 2000.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there was a downward trend in manufacturing while the other figures rose over the period in the question.
As regards agriculture, this figure reached a peak of around 50%, and then there was a considerable fluctuation between 1900 and 2000. Following this, the percentage of agriculture bottomed out at just under 5% in 2000. This was the same for manufacturing. It started at just over 45% in 1900 before decreasing significantly, at approximately 15% in 2000.
Turning to the details, The business and financial began to the lowest, at just 5%. However, these figures rose dramatically and reached a peak of about 35% in 2000.
In conclusion, it is noticeable that both agriculture and manufacture had a downturn whereas there was a huge contribution in business and finance to the economy of the United Kingdom over the 20 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, then, whereas, while, as regards, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97647058824 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97721450829 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570588235294 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9535460554 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0875262596652 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381676799766 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412432643718 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478108402511 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348182191876 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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