The graph below gives information from 1 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below gives information from 1 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A glance at the line graph reveals fluctuations on the energy consumption in the USA over a period of 50 years, from 1980 to 2030. Overall, there were two separate trends during this period.

Regarding the first trend which includes nuclear, hydropower, and wind-solar energy, about 2.5 quadrillion units them were used in 1980. These three kinds of energy varied between 1990 and 2008. Since then, they are predicted to remain unchanged until 2030 except for a slight rise for nuclear as well as solar- wind power in the end of 2030.

Besides the gradual trend, the escalating trend includes petrol and oil, coal, and natural gas. It is indicated that just above 15 quadrillion units of coal were used in 1980. This energy soon increased rapidly in 1990-1995 and kept gradually until 2008. It is foreseen that coal will peak at 30 quadrillion units in 2030. Natural gas experienced dramatic fluctuations from 1980 to 2008 with its peak at 23 quadrillion units in 2000. it is projected to remain unchanged until 2030 with 25 quadrillion units.

Petrol and oil had the greatest consumption of all with 35 quadrillion units in 1980 and even though there will be variations in 15 years later, this figure is still estimated to reach the highest consumption of 50 quadrillion units in 2030.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...s peak at 23 quadrillion units in 2000. it is projected to remain unchanged until ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, regarding, so, still, then, well, except for, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91780821918 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60478170319 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2095608425 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183220523193 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720148672027 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538262992736 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114941729455 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221644245646 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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