The graph below illustrates energy utilizing during the period 1980- 2030 in the USA, according to the data from 2008 report.
It is transparently manifest that petrol and oil possessed the highest consumed energy in 1980 by 35 quadrillion units. It pursued an upward trend until 2030 with an exception reduction over 15 year.
On the other hand, coal and gas resembled a growth until 2015. Although After that coal kept on its rise to almost 30 quadrillion units by 2030, natural gas underwent a constant trend during approximately 15 until 2030 by almost 25 quadrillion units.
When it comes to nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower sources of energy, their consumption was the same about 4 quadrillion units by 1980. Nuclear followed a gradual rise from 1980 to 2030 and met 6 quadrillion units at the end. Similarly solar/wind had a slow increase during these year except a slight drop during almost 5 years (1990-1995) and reached 5 quadrillion units by 2030, while story about hydropower was somehow complicated. It experienced a bit growth until 1995 and by a little fluctuation until 2010 again stood on its initial amount by 4 and remained steady until 2030.
To sum up, it is obviously revealed that the popularity of the fossil fuels during these 50 years was significantly dominant, while the consumption of environment friendly sources of energy couldn’t improve that much.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...and met 6 quadrillion units at the end. Similarly solar/wind had a slow increase during t...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this year' or 'these years'?
Suggestion: this year; these years
...y solar/wind had a slow increase during these year except a slight drop during almost 5 ye...
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Line 7, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ached 5 quadrillion units by 2030, while story about hydropower was somehow compl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11790393013 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86725702207 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589519650655 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4843665592 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.2 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275910315018 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112751676522 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980102775249 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164080613706 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121848716863 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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