Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.Discuss both these views and five your own opinion

There is a contentious debate surrounding the issue of the education of the boys and girls throughout the globe in this era. Some people assert that it would be wise if boys and girls educate in single sex school. On the flip side, others hold the opposite view. To me, the idea of the former party seems more appealing and in this essay i am going to delve both points of views.

On the one hand, when it comes to single sex institutions, it would be transparent that children would be compared with identical sex. In the light of the fact that each gender has some weak and strong points, so it would be distinctively viable that attending in the single sex school would reveal the best evaluation of their performance. For example, although boys conquer a majority of the prizes regarding mathematics and physics, girls are more superior in term of designing and painting.

On the other hand, in favor of second party, it is believed that children should participate in mixed schools. Although, it would contribute to better perception of the diverse gender characteristic, it would result in increase in the rate of the sexual problems and illegitimate relationships. Hence, it would have detrimental effects on the concentration of the student on their lessons. For example, according to the recent survey of the psychology faculty of the X University, the rate of the indecent assault in the Iran is the lowest in the world. So, it could be readily perceive that the advantage of the single education somehow outweigh the mixed one.

To sum up, in my personal view, children would more benefit of the attending in single sex schools. Not only would they be extremely more concentrated in their studying, but it would not lead to immoral companion-ships. Therefore, it is hoped that the policy of the single sex education would result in the bright future generation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... seems more appealing and in this essay i am going to delve both points of views....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, for example, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.909375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82437596813 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5002164496 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181574334108 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679942527139 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667756718273 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119209540734 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598292516145 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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