The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The line graph shows information about the expenditure of six different forms of energy in the USA since 1980 with forecasts until 2030.
Overall, it can be seen that there has been an increase in the number of various sources of energy until 2017. It is also exptected that this pattern will be followed by petrol and oil, coal and natural gas until 2030, while the consumption of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower will remain low but steady by the year 2030.
In 1980, petrol and oil consumption stood at 35 quadrillion units, higher than the other five kinds of energy, and it is predicted to increase to more than 45 unit until 2030. Likewise, coal consumption has risen steadily from 1980 to 2017 and the prediction shows that this trend will continue until 2030, the gap between petrol and oil and coal will remain the same during the given period.Natural gas, followed a similar pattern from 1980 to 2017, after that it will remained stable at 25 units for the following thirteen years. In regard to solar/wind, hydropower and nuclear , these figures started at approximately 5 units in 1980, and then fluctuated slightly until 2008. It is clear that these figures will not rose significantly in the future.
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.... In 1980, petrol and oil consumption stood at 35 quadrillion units, higher th...
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Suggestion: remain
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...that it will remained stable at 25 units for the following thirteen years. In reg...
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...rd to solar/wind, hydropower and nuclear , these figures started at approximately ...
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Suggestion: rise
...It is clear that these figures will not rose significantly in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, then, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87980769231 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58292562286 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591346153846 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3236335899 43.030603864 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274855954601 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127940557118 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109148875067 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22262663181 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111211115499 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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