the line graph shows the information that energy in the USA is consumed since 1980 with projection until 2030.
In general, the petrol and oil is the most popular power that people use from 1980 to 2030 and the hydropower is the least popular energy that people consume from 1980 to 2030
In detail, from 1980 to 1985 the petrol and oil quantity rapidly decrease from 35 to 31 quadrillion units, after that this energy gradually increase from 31 to 49 quadrillion units. the second popular power that USA consume are coal and natural gas. these energy is quite similar about consumption. from 1980 to 1985 the natural gas rapidly decrease from 20 to 16 and the coal gradually increase from 15 to 16, and from 2008 to 2030, the natural gas gradually increase from 16 to 25 and the coal gradually rise from 16 to 30. The third group popular energy are nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower. From 1980 to 2030, the nuclear slowly increase from 4 to 9 and solar/wind slowly rise from 4 to 6. The last power is stably mantain at 4.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: YS89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, third, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54594594595 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35743853268 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443243243243 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.52105764 43.030603864 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 105.125 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336209467435 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152315580822 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149910811924 0.0843802449381 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302294789516 0.15604864568 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149396288959 0.0819641961636 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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