The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia the UK and other regions

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The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions.

The line graph compares the percentage of Australian people who were born in different parts of the world.
Overall, it is clear that there were significant changes about the percentage of people living in Australia who came from Asia, UK and other regions shown on the graph. While figures for people born in Asia and Other increased considerably, the percentage of Australian people born in the UK fell steadily. The total population saw a steady drop in the first 25 years, but later rose sharply during the final 10 years of the given period.
In 1976, the Australian people were born in the UK accounted for about 14%, while Other and Asia accounted for 12% and 3% respectively. Over the following 25 years, the Australians came from the UK dropped to approximately 6%, the figures for Other and Asia rose steadily to 11% and 9% respectively. The total population of Australia, in the meantime, experienced a gradual decline from 23% in 1976 to it's all-time low of 21% in 2001.
From 2001 to 2011, the proportion of Australian people born in the UK went down to 5%. By contrast, Australian people of Asian and European descent increased over the same 10-year period. The total demographics at this particular time frame saw a steep growth to its peak of 25%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79452054795 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7416735848 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0497689454 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388740446675 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165215846603 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162084986109 0.0843802449381 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257372818927 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136053462527 0.0819641961636 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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