The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia the UK and other regions

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The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions.

The line graph displays the percentage of residents in Australia from Asia, the UK and other regions from 1976 and 2011.
In general, the total percentage of people coming from the examined regions saw an upward trend throughout the period. Whilst the percentage of UK citizens in Australia decreased overtime, that of Asia and other regions experienced a growth.
In 1976, about 23% of Australian residents are from all three areas. This figure declined in to just over 20% in 2001, before rising sharply to 25% at the end of the period. Asia saw the fastest growth with the number for this particular area increasing from just about 3% in 1976 to 15% in 2011.
Following a period of decrease to nearly 8% in 1981, the percentage of Australian people born in other areas surged to its all-time high of almost 15% in 2006 before dropping to around 13% in 2011. Meanwhile, the UK population is the only sector to experience a downward trajectory its number dwindling from approximately 14% in 1976 to its all-time low of 5% in 2011.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64212666868 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.972751791 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241177886324 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115913567134 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102205862301 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174582062016 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100191629171 0.0819641961636 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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