The line graph represents the number of people who were born in Asia, the UK and other regions inhabit in Australia from 1976 to 2011.
Overall = The initial impression from the graph is that, the figures for Asia and other regions witnessed upward trends over the given period while/ whereas/ . By contrast the proportion of Australian inhabitants born in the UK fell dramatically
The number of British people stayed well beyond the others at about 14% in 1976. Following that was other regions with about 11% and the data of Asia was under-neath at just above 2.5%. Over 35 years, While/ Whilst Fewer Australians came from the UK with its figure dropping to 5% in 2011. More Asians inhabited in Australia with its data climbing up to 15%. Regarding the figure for/ the percentage of other regions, it bottomed out at nearly 7.5% before reaching a peak of approximate 15% in 2006 but later dipping slightly at about 13% in the last year of the period shown.
With a reference to the total population, After falling considerably, Australia saw a significant rise in population to the end of the period before reaching the peak of 20% in the year 2011.
It experienced a gradual drop from just above 22.5% in 1976 to its all - time low of around 20% in 2001 then another leap from 2001 to 2011 at 25%
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, then, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 33.7804878049 178% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66956521739 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52474354634 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578260869565 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0297318178 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264395688584 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117776575017 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125701577529 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161919924617 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155165862411 0.0819641961636 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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