The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions.
The line graph represents the number of people who were born in Asia, the UK and other regions inhabit in Australia from 1976 to 2011.
The initial impression from the graph is that, the figures for Asia and other regions witnessed upward trends over the given period . By contrast the proportion of Australian inhabitants born in the UK fell dramatically
The number of British people stayed well beyond the others at about 14% in 1976. Following that was other regions with about 11% and the data of Asia was under-neath at just above 2.5%. Over 35 years, While/ Whilst Fewer Australians came from the UK with its figure dropping to 5% in 2011. More Asians inhabited in Australia with its data climbing up to 15%. Regarding the figure for/ the percentage of other regions, it bottomed out at nearly 7.5% before reaching a peak of approximate 15% in 2006 but later dipping slightly at about 13% in the last year of the period shown.
Turning to = In term of = With a reference to the total population, After falling considerably, Australia saw a significant rise in population to the end of the period before reaching the peak of 20% in the year 2011.
It experienced a gradual drop from just above 22.5% in 1976 to its all - time low of around 20% in 2001 then another leap from 2001 to 2011 at 25%
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ssed upward trends over the given period . By contrast the proportion of Australia...
^^
Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (In) must be used with a third-person verb: 'terms'.
Suggestion: terms
...r of the period shown. Turning to = In term of = With a reference to the total popu...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 33.7804878049 186% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61637931034 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52361370126 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573275862069 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6836281659 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265701222133 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119104409341 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126038685302 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164007905452 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155627133409 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ssed upward trends over the given period . By contrast the proportion of Australia...
^^
Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (In) must be used with a third-person verb: 'terms'.
Suggestion: terms
...r of the period shown. Turning to = In term of = With a reference to the total popu...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 33.7804878049 186% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61637931034 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52361370126 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573275862069 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6836281659 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265701222133 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119104409341 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126038685302 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164007905452 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155627133409 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.