The graph below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over ten year period

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The graph below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over ten year period

The line graph compares enrolments of international as well as local students in Australian universities over a decade.

Enrollments in Australian universities over the 10 years ( 2001 to 2010) for local students are comparatively lower then international students in commencing.
On the other hand total enrolment gradually increase in overseas students. moreover, total enrollments in local student are steady in last 4 years.

Commencing enrollments of local students is lowest in year 2001 which is below 200000 and steadily grows up to around 225000 which is at highest peak. During the year 2003 to 2006 enrolments drops below 200000. Furthermore, last 4 years enrolment rate is above 200000. Total enrollments of local students considerably increased in starting year (2001) to 2007 which is 600000. However, last 3 years enrolments are remain stable.

Mean while enrollments of commencing students significantly climbing over the period of decade that is starts from below 20000 ends to 40000 which is double enrolment can seen over the ten years. On the other hand total enrollments seems rising rapidly starts from 2000 to above 80000 in the final year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ustralian universities over the 10 years 2001 to 2010 for local students are comp...
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...radually increase in overseas students. moreover, total enrollments in local student are...
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...is below 200000 and steadily grows up to around 225000 which is at highest peak....
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...dily grows up to around 225000 which is at highest peak. During the year 2003 to...
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... to 40000 which is double enrolment can seen over the ten years. On the other hand t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, then, well, while, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39890710383 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95433912764 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546448087432 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.216832966 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8181818182 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.520761650897 0.215688989381 241% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209717866369 0.103423049105 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113102970565 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316382284966 0.15604864568 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813352975485 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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