The graph below show the propotion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This is a line graph, which demonstrates percentage of population aged 65 and above in three different countries in past and future. The proportion varies among the countries during different years.
Japan consists of the lowest percentage of 5% of people with 65 and above in 1940. On contrast, USA has the highest percentage of proportion in the same period, which is approximately two times higher than Japan's proportion.
However, the proportion had changed significantly during 2040, where as USA with the lowest percentage of 23% and Japan with the highest percentage of 27%. Further, Sweden remained second in both 1940 and 2040.
In addition to the above, Sweden recorded the highest percentage of elderly citizens during 2010 of 20%. On the other hand, Japan was lowest until 2030 and the percentage increased drastically beyond 2030 and became the highest proportion during 2040.
In conclusion, a mixed movement is observed in the proportion of elderly people in mentioned countries during 1940 and 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... had changed significantly during 2040, where as USA with the lowest percentage of 23% a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'second', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243243243243 0.268076937826 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.0918918918919 0.116061578633 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0972972972973 0.0759168565197 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.027027027027 0.0366838410393 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.183783783784 0.155750635184 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0162162162162 0.0379272487307 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.81854939789 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00540540540541 0.0210936926555 26% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0972972972973 0.0948980150116 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0162162162162 0.00967000014798 168% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1023.0 1161.00487805 88% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.9 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27607361963 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40490797546 0.337110787985 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276073619632 0.247514529752 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220858895706 0.171178102325 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.165644171779 0.112407865282 147% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81854939789 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521472392638 0.546246751206 95% => OK
Word variations: 42.3458243 49.3433353143 86% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1111111111 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.83966804 42.9750493124 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 135.714022679 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 45.7184730743 47.7609492067 96% => OK
Elegance: 3.72727272727 2.94281807926 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492510955121 0.418131533498 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135367911179 0.181151798455 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0542769655729 0.0850326197045 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.71668201184 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17046631636 0.157042692854 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.266559907528 0.228904883108 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592193175006 0.108899403657 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.396432754637 0.367819155151 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0813776358618 0.0812612215331 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35356775878 0.316326947829 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056042104119 0.0921553760075 61% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.