A friend you met last year has invited you to visit them in their country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write letter to your friend. In your letter
1. request advice about a gift for his/her family
2. ask about activities and clothing
3. find out about the food
Dear Tharaka,
I am fine and hope the same with you as well. I am thankful to you, for your kind invitation to meet you in your destination. I'm so excited to meet you, especially your family members there. I wanted show my gratitude towards them through a beautiful presentation. As a result, please suggest me an item each for your parents and brother, particularly their favourite product, which currently they do not possess it.
I addition to the above, as you aware, i love to associate with nature. Can you please suggest me some of the places for bird watching, animal santuaries and national parks where we can go out for a picnic one day?. Moreover, how about the climate these days?. Do i need to bring my jackets and jeans to protect myself from cold?.
Further, I prefer eating than anything and specially wanted experiment the cusion over there. Hope I could locate few restaurants which serve traditional food of the country. Adding to that, I eagerly waiting to visit the ice cream palours as well.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully,
R. Aravindhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tation to meet you in your destination. Im so excited to meet you, especially your...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I addition to the above, as you aware, i love to associate with nature. Can you ...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... with nature. Can you please suggest me some of the places for bird watching, animal santua...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., how about the climate these days?. Do i need to bring my jackets and jeans to p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65342094703 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690217391304 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6676528446 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9230769231 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28130767592 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095208271159 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093341053562 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14431376423 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962710345696 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.