The graph below show the weekly earnings of men and women in euros for 16 to 59 age groups as per their education level
the provided vertical graphs demonstrate the per week earnings by both sexes: men , and women by their education level; graduate and below graduates in different ages. the data is calibrated in euros which is clearly and coherently represented.
overall, it is crystal clear that both; undergraduated and graduated men earned more income as compared to women.
As it can be observed in first graph, teens were earning 100 euros. In next ten years below graduation, and graduated earned £300 and near 400 respectively. furthermore, adults had earned slight more than £400, which was 300 euros of others. however, males of age 49-59 below graduation were getting 500 euros whereas, others had been earning almost £700.
moving to next layout, under graduate teens had got same earnings as of men. although, it doubled after four years, and in start of earning graduate women were getting £50 more then them. Furthermore, slight decrease was in income of mature undergraduates while, in case of graduated females is was at apex and remained uniform till age group of 50-59. the weekly earnings of women below graduation oscillated with increasing age groups and was again 250 euros.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1875 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66259745727 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0549631283 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5454545455 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33649734723 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128349373071 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915595312019 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212795241886 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822868383198 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.