The graph below shows the annual water usage (in millions of cubic meters) by industries in Somecountry. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
The bar chart provides information about how much water is used for different purposes. As is observed, the illustration compares usage of groundwater and public-supply water.
According to the given graph, the least amount of public-supply water (10 million of cubic meters) belongs to both textiles and fuel. By contrast, these industries waste 80 and 70 million of cubic meters of groundwater respectively. Machinery uses 100 million of cubic meters of public-supply water, that is, five times as large as paper mill requires. To provide people with food and drinks, 190 million of cubic meters of H2O is wasted. This proportion is the same for the paper industry that needs public-supply aqua to be used and is twice as less as textile manufacturing is. If 10 million of cubic meters of groundwater belong to machinery, then for metallurgy Somecountrians waste 240 million of cubic meters. Finally, exactly 110 million of cubic meters goes to foodstuffs.
To conclude, the greatest wastes of both groundwater (430) and public supply water (240) belong to chemicals.
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...f groundwater and public supply water. According to the given graph, the least...
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... the least amount of public supply water 10 million of cubic meters belongs to b...
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...supply water 10 million of cubic meters belongs to both textiles and fuel. By co...
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...ly aqua to be used and is twice as less as textile manufacturing is. If 10 million...
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...on of cubic meters goes to foodstuffs. To conclude, the greatest wastes of bot...
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... the greatest wastes of both groundwater 430 and public supply water 240 belon...
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...greatest wastes of both groundwater 430 and public supply water 240 belong to ...
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...roundwater 430 and public supply water 240 belong to chemicals.
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...water 430 and public supply water 240 belong to chemicals.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'if', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282051282051 0.268076937826 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.123076923077 0.116061578633 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0923076923077 0.0759168565197 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0358974358974 0.0366838410393 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.123076923077 0.155750635184 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0307692307692 0.0379272487307 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75701116015 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0410256410256 0.0210936926555 194% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0564102564103 0.0948980150116 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0153846153846 0.00967000014798 159% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1081.0 1161.00487805 93% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.9 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14204545455 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380681818182 0.337110787985 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244318181818 0.247514529752 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164772727273 0.171178102325 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130681818182 0.112407865282 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75701116015 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 47.4108959527 49.3433353143 96% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4 42.9750493124 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1 135.714022679 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.689975730869 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.48048780488 608% => OK
Readability: 42.0318181818 47.7609492067 88% => OK
Elegance: 2.74193548387 2.94281807926 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262353933242 0.418131533498 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.148126361755 0.181151798455 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0664109255562 0.0850326197045 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.644296928221 0.706616315825 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150013854656 0.157042692854 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138228436389 0.228904883108 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452307901723 0.108899403657 42% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.309792278648 0.367819155151 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0241509024613 0.0812612215331 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190380079544 0.316326947829 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547470364291 0.0921553760075 59% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.