The line chart illustrates the amount of acid rain gases manufactured from 4 distinct industries in the UK. It is clear that the amount of emissions released from most of the sectors decreased, except for the transport and communication sector. In addition, that of the electricity, gas and water supply sector witnessed the most tremendous reduction over the period.
In 1990, the amount of emissions discharged from the electricity, gas and water supply sector was highest at 3.2 million tonnes, followed by other industries and the transport and communication sector, with over 2 million tonnes and 0.8 million tonnes respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for the domestic sector was lowest, with nearly 0.7 million tonnes. In the next 12 years, the other industries and the domestic sector saw slight decreases in the amount of gases to more than 1.25 million tonnes and 0.3 million tonnes respectively. Although there were a dramatic fall in the quantity of acid rain emission from the electric, gas and water supply and a minimal fluctuation in that of the transport and communication sector, the figures for both sectors were equal with nearly 0,9 million tonnes.
During the remaining years, the other industries and the transport and communication sector continued their downward trends, to 1.2 million tonnes and 0.2 million tonnes respectively in the last year of the period. In terms of the electricity, gas and water supply sector, its figure remained stable from 2002 to 2003, the same as the transport and communication sector. However, there was a recovery in that to 1 million ton before a slight reduction of 0,5 million tonnes from 2005 to 2007. Similarly, this period witnessed a considerable fall to 0,5 million tonnes in that of the electricity, gas and water supply sector.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, similarly, while, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 965.302439024 157% => OK
No of words: 292.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18150684932 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85448646551 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421232876712 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 283.868780488 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9639386327 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0140402419277 0.215688989381 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.007604096506 0.103423049105 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0104127905195 0.0843802449381 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0118917829056 0.15604864568 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00230928277741 0.0819641961636 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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