The line graph illustrates the carbon dioxide output was produced by per inhabitant in the 4 Euro countries from 1967 to 2007.
At glance at the chart reveals the number of carbon dioxide emitted by the British and Swedish decreased while that of Italian and Portuguese declined over the 40-year period.
In 1967, the carbon dioxide produced per person in the UK achieved the highest number over the following 40 years in all countries at around 11 tonnes. Whereas, the lowers number was took by Portuguese at just over one ton per inhabitant. That number of Swedish was approximately 9 tonnes which doubled that of Italian.
As it can be seen that there was a uptrend for carbon dioxide emissions made by people in those countries except the UK which was nearly unchanged in over the next 10-year period from 1967 to 1977. At that time, Sweden achieved the maximum number in carbon emissions emitted by people in their country at just over 10 tonnes per person. In the next 30 years witnessed two different trends in the number of carbon dioxide produced by people, when that number for the UK and Sweden dropped, that of Italy and Portugal gradual increase for the next following 20 years and remained in the next 10-year period. Interestingly, the number of the carbon dioxide emissions emitted by Swedish and Portuguese was equal at approximately 5 tonnes per person in 2007.
- In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 78
- Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s in all countries at around 11 tonnes. Whereas, the lowers number was took by Portugue...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
... tonnes. Whereas, the lowers number was took by Portuguese at just over one ton per ...
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Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lian. As it can be seen that there was a uptrend for carbon dioxide emissions ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83544303797 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52786637756 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455696202532 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2094702673 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164531394289 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888318133593 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573549708244 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115436385716 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054411532843 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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