The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Given graph represent the average emission of CO2 in countries like United Kingdom, Sweden Italy, Portugal during the year 1967 to 2007 by each person.
United kingdom has still been the highest emitters amongst other countries followed by Italy whereas, Sweden and Portugal together have converged to the least emitters.
On a glance it can be seen that United Kingdom was in its peak at 11 metric tonnes during the year 1967. Sweden is seen as the 2nd highest at 9 metric tonnes followed by Italy and Portugal at 5 and 1 metric ton respectively. Portugal was the least emitters throughout 1967 to 2007.
United Kingdom has decreased gradually over the years to 9 metric tonnes during 2007. Sweden steadily increased its emissions to 11 metric tonnes during 1977, later faced a huge downfall to 7 metric ton in 1987 and 5 metric ton in the year 2007. Both Italy and Portugal had a gradual increase to over the years and had steadied to 7 and 5 metric ton from 1997 to 2007.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50285714286 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1535049741 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502857142857 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 23.655513804 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148366962783 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1067508388 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836086400351 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16027845618 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882907297765 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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