The claim that animals have "rights" has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. are zoo helping or hunting our animals? should zoo,s be banned ? Do you agree or Disagree ?
One of the popular subject since the 1970 is Animal Rights. Zoological parks have been set up to protect animals and helps to safeguard them from various endangering factors.
Zoo is set up as a place where animals can be protected and preserved from extinction. They provide various facilities for animals like Food, Water etc. The main purpose of Zoo is to prevent animals as safe environment, for example Animals are protected from hunters to eliminate killing for skin, flesh etc. In other cases could serve as place for breeding, for example Zoo could help in raising young cubs with ideal situations and protecting from other predators. Thus Zoo plays a vital role in helping animals. and also could promote tourism and income to government.
On seeing the other aspects of Zoo, animals are being used for various research purposes. Many animals are subjected to modern techniques to obtain some profit, for examples in certain zoo tigers are being subjected to research with other species to obtain a new organism. In other cases animals are being kept away from their natural habitat, for example animals raised in zoo when taken back to wild would not adapt to natural living habits. Which in other ways could be said Zoo's act as a profitable place.
Zoo must be organized in a well manner to be a better place for animals with natural habitats. Government should help to improve and make the place a better living for animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 20.9802955665 14% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90612244898 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4131529076 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5561443574 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8571428571 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262884939196 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112195066373 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484398221645 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181789788181 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242912303161 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.