The chart illustrates the carbon dioxide released by each person from 1967 to 2007 from four different countries; United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal. Overall, the amount of carbon dioxide emitted varied from one nation to the other.
In 1967, the United Kingdom and Sweden are the highest emitters of carbon dioxide with above 10 and 8 metric tonnes respectively. However, the emittance gradually reduced to 9 metric tonnes in United Kingdom during 2007, whereas in Sweden it rose slightly to 10 metric tonnes in 1977 and thereafter significantly dropped to just below 6 metric tonnes in 2007.
Italy and Portugal are the lowest emitters of carbon dioxide during 1967, but the release per person in both these countries raised as the years passed by. It is clear that, Portugal with just above 1 metric tonne of carbon dioxide emission during 1967, showed a tremendous increase of approximately 6 metric tonnes in 2007. Similar trend was also observed in Italy, which started with an emission of just above 4 metric tonnes by a person in 1967 rose to 8 metric tonnes during 2007 which is indeed a significant increase.
It can be concluded that, the carbon dioxide emission was highest in United Kingdom and Sweden during 1967, however there was a gradual decrease in the emission by the residents of these countries. On the other hand, Portugal and Italy which were lowest emitters during 1967 had increased their emission by 2007.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02489626556 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48458687703 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48132780083 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1457478271 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.555555556 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283888413637 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149251926901 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544637683195 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19537864772 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258457958905 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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