It is often true that we prefer watching television to talking with our family members or our neighbours. However, I feel that TV is not the only thing that ruins our relations with the surroundings and I will discuss both sides of the argument respectively.
On one hand, television is conveyed as a dangerous tool with serious impact on individuals and society. Regarding the individuals, elders more often complain that their kids completely waste their valuable time by watching television all the day due to which, not much communication is offered from their sides. On the other side, teenagers follow all the entertainment shows and they get addicted to those shows. Moreover, Indian married woman who watch daily serials are found to have poor bonding with their family.
Contradicting to this, television is not the only cause for problems in communication. It is well known fact that internet access and electronic gadgets made people to communicate, no matter in which part of the world they are. Therefore, the necessity for people to communicate daily has decreased. People due to their hectic schedule, in order to unwind themselves from the stress they come home and watch programmes that would reenergise them. On the other hand, there are many programs whose main motto is to improve the communication gap between people.
To conclude, the main motto of programs in Tv is to entertain people. I believe that television is not the only reason for communication gap between people if it is used for regulated time.
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- Many people believe in the idea of school children wearing a school uniform but should teachers as well be required to conform to a dress code Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08300395257 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85116981879 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0312159205 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191456556011 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666402717973 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976549408998 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119268133649 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915364306711 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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