The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the vista cafe by seasons.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the information about the terms of percentage of average for everyday sales by number of various savings items such as hot coffee, iced coffee, ice cream, soup and salad at the vista café during summer and winter seasons.
In overall, regular sales of hot coffee constituted a major in winter where iced coffee in summer since iced coffee sold least in winter and hot in summer. However, a significant variations can be noticed in the selling of all food items over the seasons.
It can be seen from the information that during winter hot coffee most popular among the vista café for daily selling which accounted at three-quarter ( 75% ) whilst it declined gradually and reached at three in ten in summer. In contrast, a negligible proportion ( 1% ) of iced coffee was sold by the vista café between winter. Interestingly, a drastic increased had experienced in the daily sales of iced coffee during summer which noticed at two-fifth of the total percentage.
The graph further proves that the proportion of salad food’s everyday sales remained relatively constant in both seasons at a quarter. Furthermore, the soup who sold in the vista café everyday had accounted at double ( a half ) in winter and not summer which was at 25%. Lastly, average of regular sales of ice cream at the vista café was found a more than third ( 35% ) in summer as well as a 25% during winter .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, third, well, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89539748954 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63185612575 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481171548117 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8727737773 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173756604682 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866184419382 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365126562112 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122322881928 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303987045219 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.