The graph below shows the average monthly temperature in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting the reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph delineates the differences among Paris, Boston, and Melbourne regarding the variations in their mean temperatures in each month of the year.
A glance at the chart reveals that similar climates happen in Paris and Boston when both cities experience lower temperatures between November and March and higher temperatures for the rest of the year. Meanwhile, Melbourne records the opposite cycle and the heat range in Melbourne is the narrowest compared to that in two other cities.
Paris and Boston witness the same climates when the temperature lines both soar from their lowest points in January and climax in August at just below 25 and 32°C, respectively, then sharply plummet until December. Boston is the only city of the three which not only has the coldest temperature in January at just under 5°C but also reaches the highest in the mid-autumn.
The reverse is the case in Melbourne when the gradation of heat goes by (diễn ra) contrarily. The climate in Melbourne is cooler between May and August, and hotter in the remaining months. The level of heat in Melbourne reaches its bottom in July at approximately 16°C, which is just over half of its peak in the first and last month of the year. It can be clearly seen that of the three cities’ temperatures, Melbourne’s is the most constant since it oscillates from 16 to 26°C, while Paris and Boston witness wider heat ranges, from 8 to 24°C and from 4 to 32°C, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...st, and hotter in the remaining months. The level of heat in Melbourne reaches its ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9028340081 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70391398048 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550607287449 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7340885519 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.555555556 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982796266167 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041578663563 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363739771765 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696647446293 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233987920109 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.