The charts provide details about the mid amount of health club visits in Miami by adult abonnement holders during last year.
Season and weather conditions seem to have had an impact on both male and female visitors and the tendency rose steadily beginning from January, getting the highest point on July and falling gradually the following months.
It is interesting that men were more adherent to attend health club than women. For example, the difference between males and females each month was more prevalent in men group than in women. Moreover, in winter and autumn months the difference rate was slight, but in three warmest months the overall amount of visits by males rose significantly and the average difference was about 140-150 visits more in men group than in women. In comparison with women, whose visits were reduced in January, February and December, men also did not prefer to have a gym as often as they did it in summer months.
Turning to the pie charts, male membership by age were generally similar to female membership, but had some insignificant differences. If 55% of 21-45 years old men visited the club, just over 50% of women in the same ages were adherent to visit gym. However, under one third of women older 65 years used the club subscription, whereas a quarter of men of same age were indicated.
To sum up, it is clear that the most interested in gym were men not women, because they were more adherent to use monthly their club subscription.
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- The line graph shows changing patterns of business communication in New Stratford from 1980 to 2005 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...its more in men group than in women. In comparison with women, whose visits were reduced i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, third, whereas, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81568627451 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50422173336 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3439542075 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174182608876 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796822109461 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426086466321 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103002742151 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514253859142 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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