People have always been curious about the latest events.Thus, there have always been various types of news media which have used different ways to keep people acknowledged, from printing to online publishing, from leaflets to TV broadcasts. However,some people believe that it has affected public life negatively since it stresses people out. Although negative news might be depressing, I consider that it widens an outlook and enriches their knowledge.
On the one hand,without any doubt, news media might afflict the public. It is obvious that a big emphasis on problems can make a negative impression of the situation. For example, if there are several cases of illnesses’ outbreaks, people start to worry about being sick, which as a result, would lead to the public panic. Secondly, the media sometimes publishes inaccurate information or makes false claims. Many people believe this disinformation since they are not able to check it. Thus, people make incorrect decisions based on false accusations.
On the other side, the media always keeps people aware about the world since it can be spreaded through different modern gadgets. For instance, many people use the Internet to follow any recent news like weather forecasts or situations worldwide. Therefore, people have a constant source of new knowledge. Moreover, it exposes people to diverse cultures of other countries. Considering the fact that news is reported worldwide, people get an insight into other ways of living. Consequently, it broadens people’s knowledge and they understand other cultures better.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the news media is more advantageous for the society than damaging. Although it might occasionally be incorrect , news keeps people aware and brings them new knowledge.
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this change? Good or bad? 84
- The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994. 78
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 56
- The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000 84
- The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47101449275 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85543364198 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8397006877 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8235294118 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329156333821 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102888699981 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557314152172 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203866072689 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675539225463 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.