The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members in 2017. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members of this health club.
The line graph compares the trend of men and women using the health club in Miami and Florida in 2017. Meanwhile, the pie charts presents the percentage of the members according to gender and age.
Generally, there was an increasing trend in the number of health club members using both health clubs in the first half of the year before it decreased during the second half. It is also clear that most of its customers belong to 24 – 45 years old while the least come from other age groups.
In detail, there was a gradual increase in the number of men going in the Miami and Florida health club during the first six months starting in January from just below 600 reaching a peak of about 850 in June 2017. However, it went down from July up to December where the figure went back to its almost similar figure in January of the same year. Similarly, the same trend was noted for women with the same number of members visiting the health club in the first and last month.
Concurrently, most club members belong to 21 to 45 years old with over 50 % for both gender. This is followed by women who were 65 years old and up at 31 % which is 6 % more that of its male counterpart. Meanwhile, the least were accounted to men and women in other age groups with 20 % and 19 %, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42016806723 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24440234107 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525210084034 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0687199671 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297586828487 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122810327627 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947019837702 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205181215984 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995508266967 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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