The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or
train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph compares figures for daily travel
by workers in the UK using three different forms
of transport over a period of 60 years.
It is clear that the car is by far the most popular
means of transport for UK commuters
throughout the period shown. Also, while the
numbers of people who use the car and train
increase gradually, the number of bus users falls
steadily.
In 1970, around 5 million UK commuters
travelled by car on a daily basis, while the bus
and train were used by about 4 million and 2
million people respectively. In the year 2000, the
number of those driving to work rose to 7 million
and the number of commuting rail passengers
reached 3 million. However, there was a small
drop of approximately 0.5 million in the number
of bus users.
By 2030, the number of people who commute
by car is expected to reach almost 9 million, and
the number of train users is also predicted to
rise, to nearly 5 million. By contrast, buses are
predicted to become a less popular choice, with
only 3 million daily users.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70212765957 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48469739421 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 3.36585365854 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0708170183 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 3.83414634146 574% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238452626456 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110660560803 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508986688009 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724273732025 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707294760654 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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