The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030

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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The line graph illustrates the data regarding the number of Britishers traveling daily by three modes of transportation from 1970 to 2030

Overall, the number of UK commuters traveling by car and train have increased since the start of the period, with expectations for even more reliance on these vehicles. In contrast, bus has decreased moderately in popularity over the 60-year period with a prediction for a similar trend in the future

With regard to car, this has been the most popular form of transportation in the UK since 1970, which was used by around 5 million commuters in the beginning. This number remained unchanged until 1980, then steadily increased with projections of a surge to its peak at 9 million in 2030. A similar rising tendency was also witnessed in the number of car-travelers, nonetheless, it began the period with only half of the figure for train with 2 million.

In terms of bus, this is the only transportation that has shown considerable declines in its usages throughout the examined period. Although bus was the second most popular vehicle of UK commuters in 1970 with the usage of approximately 4 million commuters, this figure has dropped steadily and is forecasted to reach its lowest point in 2030

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, nonetheless, regarding, second, so, then, in contrast, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01442307692 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94842485653 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6485069052 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.833333333 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.23603664747 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244292488062 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12358205265 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826347027663 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158248443415 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244560879991 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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