The bar graph represents the changes in population of Asian elephants over the period from 1994 to 2007.
Elephant maximum number was in India, where it reached roughly 10,000 specimina in 1997. After seven years, population number was significantly smaller and there were nearly 7500 elephants in 2004. By contrast, China had the lowest elephant population, which was estimated to be roughly 1000 of specimina in 1997. Then, in 2004, considerably fewer species inhabited China.
Nearly as many elephants as estimated number in 2004 lived in Laos in 1997. Meanwhile, Cambodian elephant population was almost 1300 specimina, and then it slightly increased to 1500 in 2004.
Overall, general trend of elephant population in Asian countries is downward, except Cambogia.
- The pie chart below show the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990.Causes of land degradation by region 78
- To some people, studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it’s important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history? 56
- Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increasedsteadily since the middle of the nineteenth century The map below showsthe development of the village Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of thevillage 73
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your own op 83
- People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 650.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 119.0 196.424390244 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46218487395 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30283395202 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83565822332 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663865546218 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7782187639 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.25 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154412987178 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742885143206 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671518678697 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114017642032 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715722201293 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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