The graph below shows changes in young adult unemployment rates in England between 1993
and 2012.
The line graph demonstrates a changing pattern regarding the unemployment rates of young people in London and the rest of England over the course of 19 years starting in 1993.
Looking at the graph, it is apparent that the percentages of unemployed individuals aged 16 to 24 in London experienced an upward trend while that of the overall decreased. Throughout the the period, the percentage of jobless people between 16 and 24 in London registered the highest figure compared to the remaining three sections examined.
In 1993, the proportion of unemployment among young adults in London was around 22%. This number dropped to nearly 15% between 1993 and 2002 before reaching its peak at 25% by 2012. A similar pattern with regard to unemployment was seen in the same percentage of the unemployed individuals in the same age group in the rest of England, where it fell from about 18% to 12% between 1993 and 2002 before climbing to approximately 20%.
At the beginning of the period, the overall unemployment proportion in London registered at relatively 15%. This number witnessed a progressive decline from 15% to only a half between 1993 to 2006 and then maintained at approximately 10% in 2012. The rate of jobless individuals in other parts of England showed a similar development, where it dwindled from 10% to 5% between 1993 and 2008 before stabilizing at about 7% afterwards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...at of the overall decreased. Throughout the the period, the percentage of jobless peopl...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yed individuals in the same age group in the rest of England, where it fell from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, then, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02155172414 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94244419722 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512931034483 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2764937826 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.444444444 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345401061599 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140699585729 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839106110272 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208543619704 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088484699609 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.