The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007

The graph gives information about the proportion of 3 spreads ( Marganine , Low Fat and reduced spreads , butter ) consumed between 1981 and 2007.
Overall , there was a decrease in all spreads except for Low fat and reduced of spreads , which showed an upward trend over the period given.It is also clear that the highest figure was Butter whereas the lowest figure can be seen in Margarine .
The percentage of Butter started at roughly 141 grams , after which it experienced a dramatic growth to 160 grams in 1986 , before ending the period decreasing at 55 grams.A similar pattern could be observed in the figure for Margarine .90 grams consumed in 1981 and then the rate witnessed a mild drop for margarine exactly 80 grams but latter a plateau between 1991 and 1996 . At the last years , the figure for Margarine decreased precisely 40 grams .
In 1996 , 10% was consumed in Low fat and reduced spreads , with a subsequent significant increased to 80 grams in 2003 a final drop to 75 grams in 2007 .

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... Marganine , Low Fat and reduced spreads , butter consumed between 1981 and 2007....
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...e , Low Fat and reduced spreads , butter consumed between 1981 and 2007. Overall...
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...consumed between 1981 and 2007. Overall , there was a decrease in all spreads exc...
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...xcept for Low fat and reduced of spreads , which showed an upward trend over the p...
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...d an upward trend over the period given.It is also clear that the highest figure w...
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...e lowest figure can be seen in Margarine . The percentage of Butter started at ro...
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...e of Butter started at roughly 141 grams , after which it experienced a dramatic g...
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...d a dramatic growth to 160 grams in 1986 , before ending the period decreasing at ...
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...nding the period decreasing at 55 grams.A similar pattern could be observed in th...
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...t latter a plateau between 1991 and 1996 . At the last years , the figure for Marg...
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...etween 1991 and 1996 . At the last years , the figure for Margarine decreased prec...
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...r Margarine decreased precisely 40 grams . In 1996 , 10% was consumed in Low fat ...
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... decreased precisely 40 grams . In 1996 , 10% was consumed in Low fat and reduced...
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... consumed in Low fat and reduced spreads , with a subsequent significant increased...
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...in 2003 a final drop to 75 grams in 2007 .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81286549708 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.544262003 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.482343006 43.030603864 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.6 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2 22.9334400587 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142855874484 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942721014897 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950336776417 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116783465334 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933621519207 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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