The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph demonstrates how much of 4 different types of food namely chicken, beef, lamb and fish were consumed by a European nation over the course of 25 years starting in 1979.

Overall, the expenditure on beef, lamb and fish experienced a downward trend, with a exception of chicken. Besides, fish consumption always registered the lowest figure throughout the period.

It can be seen from the graph that the expenditure on beef stood at about 220 grams per person per week in 1979, was the highest. The figures for lamb and chicken were lower, at 150 grams and under 150 grams respectively. The consumption of fish was the lowest, at about 60 grams.

Throughout the period, chicken consumption is the only one which kept increasing to reach the highest figure at roughly 250 by the year 2004. By contrast, the consumption of lamb and fish decreased gradually to around 50 grams and about 40 grams respectively in 2004. Even though the amount of beef which was consumed was about 240 g, the highest point in 1983, this fell steadily to just over 100 grams in 2004.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...fish experienced a downward trend, with a exception of chicken. Besides, fish con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82887700535 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60601793226 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577540106952 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1181427558 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119429733867 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569774280081 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345975544896 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817045392483 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023656685596 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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