The line chart illustrates the weekly total grams of fish and other three kinds of meat consumed by people who lived in a European country over 25 years, from 1979 to 2004. The units are measured in grams per person per week. In general, chicken, in term of the amount of consumption, constantly increased, while the others decreased, with the trend of fish remaining marginal toward the other figures.
The amount of chicken eaten by the people climbed by 100 to 250 in 2004. This rise has shifted chicken to be the most popular food for the last 15 years of the given period, which replaced the position of beef.
By contrast, the figure of beef, lamb, and fish went down during the 25 year period. At the early given years, beef was the most favorable food in the country. Regardless of a sharp rise between 1983 and 1985, the figure fell to hit its lowest point at 100 by 2004. Looking more closely at lamb and fish, there is a striking similarity between the quantity of the intake of lamb and fish, with the amount of consumption falling down from 150 and 60 in 1979 to 60 and 40 in the end of the given period, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47115384615 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3174273828 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6888441352 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129800018596 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471995659224 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547514371479 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770612875473 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417115248091 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.