The given line graph illustrates the amount of fish, beef, lamb and chicken which was consumed in European countries over the 25 year period from 1979 to 2004.
Overall,what stands out of the graph is that,among the 4 production,chicken and beef made up the highest pattern,followed by lamb and fish representing the lowest.In additional ,the chicken trend was upward compare with the others.
According to chicken consumption, it commenced at roughly 150 gram person per week as a lamb in 1979.In the beginning the beef consumption was the highest, it stood at just over 200, while the consumption of fish was the lowest just above 50 and the trend was relatively stable till end.
By following it, the figure for chicken fluctuated frequently and increased remarkably and has reached just 250 by 2004..In contrary, there were enormous split between chicken and lamb after beginning and the figure for lamb halved steeply to almost 70 in 2004. Finally, it can be seen that beef trend accounted for just under 250 approximately 1983.After that, although the trend stabilize between 1984 and about 1988 ,then it plunged remarkably and has reached just 140 by 2004.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08854166667 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88907616163 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9678148273 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.4 112.824112599 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 1.69756097561 2180% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156016833105 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934777059037 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621316334033 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106023265807 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641552112582 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.2329268293 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.