The bar chart provide information about contribution of three sectors to the UK economy in twentieth century.
First of all, we see significant increasing of agriculture in 1950th years. Besides in this years is shown constant manufacturing. However, both of them decreased to 2000 year, especially agriculture sector. So we can observed almost 50 folds declining. Manufacturing had high level in 1900, but it steadily increased to 2000 year. the least developing sector in the beginning of 20th century in the UK economy was business and financial sector, but it had constant growth during these years. As a result, we can observe that this sediment of Economics became more considerable.
Thus, during 20th century 20 parts of the UK economy has different grade of their developing. Since high level of agriculture and manufacturing since 45-50% to 2-15% respectively. Whereas business and financial factors increased since 5% to 40%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, thus, whereas, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38513513514 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06470130409 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655405405405 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4859540731 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4545454545 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 5.23603664747 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199833261222 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701106415292 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975270699179 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176707178711 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112657041138 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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