The bar graph depicts the input from three sectors into British economy in the twentieth century.
At the first glance, it is evident that the contributions made by agriculture and manufacturing sides were tremendous in
the earlier half of the century; however, as the years progressed business and finance became the predominant pillar of the
British economy.
In the year 1900, the most significant contribution of approximately 50% was made my agriculture department, this was
succeeded by manufacturing sector which had an input of around 45%. While, business and finance had a share of mere 3%
After fifty years, the support to economy from agriculture segment grew to around 53%, whereas, that from manufacturing
department fell to about 37%. However, share by the business and finance mounted about two folds to 8%.
In the later part of the century, that is in the year 1975, the input from agriculture side dropped dramatically to 10%.
was the case with manufacturing which saw a decline of 4%, albeit not as significant as agriculture sector. Nevertheless,
business and finance was the only segment where improvement was noticed. At the end of the 20th century, agriculture
sector had an input of only about 3%, while, that from manufacturing it was approximately 15%. The only area that
continued to grow was business and finance which finally had a contribution of about 35%.
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the comparis 73
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the comparis 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26872246696 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02607581156 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502202643172 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7277229761 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163841236966 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787688326874 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548431207299 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711065233244 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513797286783 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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