The graph below shows the demand for electricity in england during typical days in winter and summer. the pie chart shows how electricity is used in an english home.

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The graph below shows the demand for electricity in england during typical days in winter and summer. the pie chart shows how electricity is used in an english home.

The given charts depict the consumption and purpose of electricity used during winter and summer days in case study of England

At a glance, It observed that the striking factor being the overall consumption of electricity is greater in the winter season. At the midnight, consumption of electricity is nearly about 18,000 units in summer. Where it is double in case of winter season. In following three hours, consumption of electricity recorded about 40,000 unit in winter. Between the time period of 3 a.m. to 12:00 a.m. can seen from 40,000 to 30,000 unit. Peak hours of consumption is also at peak value which is nearly about 45,000 units is recorded. Contrastingly in summer days, consumption of electricity in following three hours recorded gradually dip approximately 12,000. Throughout the day consumption is less from 20,000 units. Commomly it observed that conjunction of electricity at near 9:00 a.m. is less in both cases of days

To sum up, in winter season consumption of electricity is greater than summer due to heating purposes of water and room because of changing in wheather.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...onsumption of electricity is greater in the winter season. At the midnight, consumption of electr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is nearly about 18,000 units in summer. Where it is double in case of winter season. ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
...time period of 3 a.m. to 12:00 a.m. can seen from 40,000 to 30,000 unit. Peak hours ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12777777778 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89227899377 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4394532795 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.555555556 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188950993646 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893619277091 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805728398446 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184588000695 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992920517869 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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