The given line chart illustrates about consumption of electricity by England people during winter and summer seasons, while the pie chart describes various areas where electricity is being used in England homes. The calibration of data in line graph is in watts while it is percentage in pie chart.
Overall, it is noticed that most of the power is used in winter for heating room and water as compared to winter. The variation in usage of electricity is moderate in summer started with 18000 and inclined shortly with 2000 at the end of the day.
Regarding the line graph, the usage of electricity is significant during midnight in winter which is of nearly 35000, however it rose dramatically to 40,000 by 3'o' clock in the morning. After that, the consumption has reduced rapidly to 30,000 during 8'0' clock, moreover it experienced a drastic improvement to 40,000 by afternoon and it remains in higher position which is reached to 48000 and stood as highest consumption of the day. On the other hand, power utilization in winter was less when compared to winter with 20,000 by end of the day.
Secondly, the pie chart shows the maximum consumption of electricity is for heating room and water which means half of the power, furthermore the other half is categorized for three factors. One is with 18% for oven, kettles, washing machines and rest is used with equal percentage of 15% for lighting, TV, radio, vacuum cleaners, food, mixers, electric tools.
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...aners, food, mixers, electric tools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98380566802 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67418024467 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53036437247 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.409434743 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.777777778 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.23603664747 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35514399391 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138000842559 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762829310922 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207246324914 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686899305296 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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