The presented line graph gives information about typical daily demand for power in winter and summer in England, why the bar graph demonstrates the percentage of the consumption of electricity in English residence.
As can be seen in the line graph that demand for power is higher in winter rather than in summer. The consumption for electricity in winter is between 30000 to 40500 units approximately and largest amount of electricity is used in between 21 to 24 hours. On the other side, the demand for electricity in summer is significantly lower than winter and lied between 10000 to 20000 units. The largest consumption of electricity in summer is take place between 12 to 15 hours.
Now, coming to the bar graph, more than half of the total electricity is consumed by the heating items, which is the highest consumption items among the other three. kitchen items like ovens, kettles consumed only 17.5% of the total, whereas lowest consumption of the electricity is carried by other electronic items like TV, radio, food mixtures and many more, accounted for slightly over one-sixth of the total.
Overall, the winter electricity consumption was doubled in comparison with summer. AS a result the biggest use of electricity is given to heating rooms and heating water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kitchen
...onsumption items among the other three. kitchen items like ovens, kettles consumed only...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08530805687 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79456936452 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521327014218 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6313615509 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.222222222 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30067021838 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143257928053 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664799011644 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196884826688 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812505599734 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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