The bar graph gives an overview of female jobless rates in four countries of the united kingdom which is England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland in the year 2013 and 2014.
It is worth noting that, the lowest female unemployment percentage can be seen in wales and northern ireland on the contrary highest jobless rates seen in England and scotland.
the most striking features is that Wales and Northern Ireland had the decresed jobless percentage from 2013 to 2014 at nearly 5.5% to 5.0% which was a bit alike with England, decreased precisely from 6.8% to 6.5%. Thia features differs in case of Scotland where female unemployment proportion was minimally around one percentage higher in the year of 2014.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 597.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 119.0 196.424390244 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01680672269 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30283395202 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50707634901 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 172.8 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.109759059 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 149.25 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180851628546 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116446017167 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709149103741 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13502582509 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686034381919 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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