For every evils and crime, there are different types of punishment accrediated by the government. As we says imprisonment is among the popular. i think length of the prison will obviously change the way of behavior and their personal habits, which doesn't mean it will reduce the crime rate.
first of all i believe that people with longer period imprisonment will have gradually change of the behavior and long term habits. people can be put themselves as in the societies the good civilian because they have so much lower confidence about the sins that they had done earlier , in addition they want to live as tranquil lifestyle for the life that will be left behind. For example in one of the book called Balmiki that describe ancient time peoples, Balmiki was the most culprit person but after the years of imprisonment he later became a famous writer and wrote a famous sanskrit book called Balmiki. As such a bad sins person can change into the better civilian.
secondly, as we know the people who don't wanna change their habits and will remain the same mentality will not help in the reduction of crime rate. some peoples with the evil minded will not understand the value of prision and they doesn't make senses of length of the prision. for example Hitler had his most of the lifetime in prision still he was one of the greatest criminals in the history books. so the length of the imprisonment willn't help these kind of people.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the reduction of crime rate by giving criminals longer impriionment completely depend upon the persons and the habits what they will come up to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i think, in addition, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76595744681 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41594837542 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6718747764 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172818938122 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584910985009 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481355955782 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111707216957 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246013434741 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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