The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... a period of 5 years from 1995 to 2000. in this comparison, the US has the peak of...
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Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
..., publishing, music, video, and cinema. that it comes to $ 257 billion about double ...
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Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$257'.
Suggestion: $257
...ic, video, and cinema. that it comes to $ 257 billion about double more than Europe. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... billion about double more than Europe. in between these Asia has the least money ...
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Line 1, column 424, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$67'.
Suggestion: $67
...oney on the entertainment that is about $ 67 billion in 1995. All of the countries ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...nt that is about $ 67 billion in 1995. All of the countries have a growth in 5 years peri...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ntries have a growth in 5 years period. the common thing is that they have the most...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 487.0 965.302439024 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 107.0 196.424390244 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55140186916 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2162214527 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62439848059 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654205607477 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 135.0 283.868780488 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5371480129 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1666666667 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197215683817 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878336401388 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1103932293 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132703085254 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665693827455 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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