The graph below shows how prices of ''high-tech gadgets'' changed over time in some country. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
The two lines graph compares the average price of the two high-tech gadgets in some country from July 2004 to Dec. 2006. it can be clearly seen that at first there was a slight difference in the average price between the two gadgets; As the years went by, the price of both gadgets became almost identical.
Let us take a look in 2004, the navigation system was the most expensive gadget with the amount as high as $4,000 while smart phones were approximately 25% less with the average price of $3,000. During the first quarter of 2005, the navigation system gadgets had a sudden drop by ...
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After a few months the smart phones goes up a little bit
After a few months the smart phones went up a little bit
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Probably, because of the global market competition related to other innovative...
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