the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six month period in 2011

The line chart indicates the number of requests that were received by the Uk tourist office in a three-way ( in person, by letter, by telephone) in the first six months.
Overall, the figures for requests in person and by telephone show a downward tendency. Meanwhile, requests by letter decreased gently over the given period.
According to survey data, most people send requests by telephone about 900 calls have been recorded in the first month. Nevertheless, the trend seemed to decrease to 800 in February, before growing in the next four months and reaching highs of 1600 in June.
In comparison with the figure for letters and emails, which witnessed a slow drop and reached the lowest point at under 400 in June, the number of requests in person rocketed sharply and finally finished as the joint-highest at almost 1900 at the same time. In detail, the figure for requests that were received directly began at over 400 in January and then increased dramatically, surpassing ''by the letter'' in the mid of February and March, which had only around 700. After that, exceeding "by telephone'' in the mid of March and April, which had only 10000 at this time.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by the Uk tourist office in a three-way in person, by letter, by telephone in th...
^^
Line 4, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...and reaching highs of 1600 in June. In comparison with the figure for letters and emails,...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, nevertheless, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53007620105 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9592309407 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104172463634 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490916406697 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519855502852 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794483776362 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604796366062 0.0819641961636 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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